Some girls ( UPDATE!)

[Shamagim]

Hello:).

Some semi-life drawings, I hope you like them.

( Don´t worry, I know that if this suck completely it will be removed to another seccion)

[Blue]

great poses. My only crit is the eyes on the first girl look a little like a mask, but it doesn't look enough like a mask to make me believe it is. Other then that, i like um. :)

[Vulgar`]

1st - The backround is right on-point. Her agreeable whale-skinned like body is nicely shaped, and leaves room for the red hair. I can imagine Angelina Jolie as this character.. but no nipples? : /

2nd - This woman's joints almost look metallic. Her kneebone is excessively flat, as well as her arching back. Thenstead of the jagged blade, maybe a bow & arrow would better fit her character. The light purplish glow of the backround doesn't exactly mismatch her red garments, but it doesn't fully work yet. You should move the lock of her blonde hair just far enough so the onlooker can see a glint of her eye. Her hairline also might be a little too straight - like Steve Harvey or someone who just got a tape. I feel that this needs a personal touch to complete it like the first.

The tattoos are the highlights of these. Respect.

Keep doing you

[poise]

.. but no nipples? : /


what he said. ;)

[Jessica Hook]

Hey these show a really nice exploration of light and shadow! My biggest crit would be the anatomy of the foot in the first piece. It looks like she was the victim of Chinese foot binding and her toes fell off :( ya'know what I mean? I'd say that you should take another pass at that foot and get some bones and toes in there :)

[John]

Are these drawings from a life drawing session that you painted digitally? Esp. the shoulder area and the knees in the second one hint at that :)
Still nice, and if those are colored life drawings, then thats a nice idea too.

[Craig D]

Hey Shamagin
especially on the second one watch out more for your edges, they are too hard on some spots. These are nice though. Nice to see how much you have improved in the last year
Craig

[Tomato]

Both of those semi-life drawings are fantastic! I love the first ones pose and the second one just kicks ass! Good stuff!

[Shamagim]

Wow!, thanks you your comments ( didn´t espected that many is such short time lapse....normaly I just get 3 or 7 and then the post goes down to page 2 :))
Lord Blue: Thanks!, her face is sort of look like a seudo mask, but I think the nose bridge might be have some disturving edges.

Vulgar: Hey, thank you, I´ll give her some nipples; And I´ll change the backround color to a more greenish one

Poise: Working on thoser nipples :).

Yumiko: Oops.. ( I was hoping nobody noticed the lack of toes...working some toes right away ),I´m still having problems with feet and hand proportions...I keep making them smaller after the picture is done...call it some kind of strange fear about making them to big :).

John: Still kinda confused about what "life drawing" means....I even looked up the definition...but this was more like a photo references in wish I changed some things...nothing special.

CraigD: You remmember ?? Now that´s flattering :D, I somehow though nobody noticed I was here. I know what you mean, Just figuring out that I could work with 100% opasity to work faster.....And I just figured out how to effectivelly use the stylus wheel today after breakfast ( that might help to render things without getting that hard edges)


Thank you all for your comments, I´ll work on the nipples, toes and edges right away :D!.

[Shamagim]

Update:

[magicgoo]

Very nice! I like the updates you did. I love the girl with the weapon. I think the cloth draped on the floor is weaker in comparison to the rest of the piece, but I love the rest of it.

[Theo]

yay its finally nippled!

lookin good man, draw more!

[angel of light]

on the pic with the girl in orange, the "floor" underneath her should be much darker in shadow. It looks like shes floating right now. Other than that good job.

[Dile_]

Nice Shamagim, You improveing nicely!
Great pieces! :teeth:

[Chuck,mate.]

dude.... they`re gorgeous!
both looks great, and the colors are pulsating with energy.
keep it up.

[Charlie_2.0]

That chick with the weapon looks hot:D...nice pics dude

[Shamagim]

Muchas thanks for the replys!


Magicgoo: Thanks, I know what you mean about the clothes on the floor.

Theo: Yay!!! :)

angel of light: Thanks, There should be a shadow just below her legs, I´ll add it before putting it in my portfolio.

Dile: thank you!

Chuck,mate: Thanks man, I´m glad I finally managed to put some nice colors on my stuff .

Charlie 2.0: Thank you very much.

[midknight523]

........wow.......

[Carnifex]

you might wanna add credit to domai.com for the refs.
nice pics:)

[Shamagim]

I took the refs from something called " kind girls gallery" or sumething like that ( in the Wiki)...So yeah, Domai pics despite of being in low resolution there, are the best!

[John]

:) Ok, i though you used drawings from a life model. Good simplification for the photo ref.

[Tomato]

yeah! those new pictures look much better!

[BluJackal]

Does the purple girl have one wing or is it behind her? Other than that, Amazing.
BTW, I think the second girl looks more powerful with the "metallic" joints. I don't know why, but to me, It looks cool.

[Bobafingo]

Very nice, love how smooth it is

[Kalango]

The barbarian(i think) blond girl is awesome! and that alien like chick is kind of hot...

[PeterLee]

cool tatto on her!