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IILooney
June 20th, 2006, 09:36 PM
Please give me C+C so that I can improve.
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a222/iilooney/perspective001.jpg
Lake
June 23rd, 2006, 06:31 PM
I like, but it's kinda hard to see what's going on. Can you post a higher rez version?
IILooney
June 23rd, 2006, 06:53 PM
Here ya go!:D

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a222/iilooney/Art/Perspective/perspective001.jpg
Lake
June 23rd, 2006, 07:24 PM
It's a nice drawing, but when you say "perspective study" I don't see what you mean. Did you actually lay out a perspective grid for this drawing? It would help you immenseley to use actual vanishing points in studies before heading to a finished piece where you have to imagine them.
Evil_Sloth
June 23rd, 2006, 07:31 PM
the wall in infront of the building in the foreground seems to be relating to a different VP to the one in the BG.
cool study :)
IILooney
June 23rd, 2006, 08:02 PM
It's a nice drawing, but when you say "perspective study" I don't see what you mean. Did you actually lay out a perspective grid for this drawing? It would help you immenseley to use actual vanishing points in studies before heading to a finished piece where you have to imagine them.

I used a perspective grid but you can't see the grid because I laid it in with a 10% grey. but the vps were off the page so I had to improvise, but, you know, it's tough to get it perfect when your holding your sketchbook with your left forearm. As Evil_Sloth pointed out, and which I just now noticed, the wall on the left isn't staying true to the vp. For my next study I will contain the vp's on the page and draw on a smaller scale. I think I will thumbnail the composition too, before I start the drawing. Thanks for the responses.
Infinit
June 24th, 2006, 06:04 PM
the building in the left (the modern)
it looks like it sinks into the ground at the side further away
just change the lines inside the building to solve this
IILooney
July 26th, 2006, 08:51 PM
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a222/iilooney/Art/Perspective/SJSU_PEbuilding.jpg

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a222/iilooney/Art/Perspective/Insect-Machinedesign.jpg

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a222/iilooney/Art/Perspective/4thSanFernando.jpg
Maerrick
July 27th, 2006, 04:53 AM
i think the last picture was the strongest one. props on doing this, perspective is such a tedious thing to do