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yungks.ae
June 20th, 2006, 12:12 AM
Crash me HARD, I need as much critique as possible.

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/426/earth6ut.jpg

RobertMac
June 20th, 2006, 12:22 AM
I love the stylized look you have going with the head and torso area. But the forearms and legs look a bit like afterthoughts. I want to see the great feel you have going extended out to the whole figure.

I know you probably haven't given much thought to the background, yet, but don't forget to continue the stylization out to it, also. You'd have a kick ass piece, then.

yungks.ae
June 20th, 2006, 02:24 AM
Yeah I'd have to agree with every single word you've said, except for 'the'. I got really tired of this piece after a while, I guess it really shows off after a while, huh.

Kan Muftić
June 20th, 2006, 06:12 AM
Killer character, poor environment. Believe me, i hate to make enviros once the character is done, but this fellow is going to ROCK once you make some believable environments.
TIP: keep the background stylized the same way you did on the character. That gives it the side kick!

Christian223
June 20th, 2006, 11:04 PM
Ahhh, i think i know what you aim for, so, i took the time to search for my all time favourite artist of the world: Kay Nielsen... copy him!!!

http://www.artpassions.net/cgi-bin/show_image.pl?../galleries/nielsen/blassie5.jpg

http://www.artpassions.net/cgi-bin/show_image.pl?../galleries/nielsen/b3princesses2.jpg

http://www.artpassions.net/cgi-bin/show_image.pl?../galleries/nielsen/bwest_n1.jpg

http://pds1.egloos.com/pds/1/200510/06/71/b0043871_2434448.jpg

http://nielsen.artpassions.net/nielsen.html
http://www.bpib.com/illustrat/nielsen.htm

Pixeldragoon
June 20th, 2006, 11:30 PM
I don't see why he needs a different background...

About the arms- The one on our right, it kinda is all snakey like... It might look better if you make it more real- like make the little valve part more of an elbow... even if the structures have no bones or whatever, it still creates a more believable, dynamic piece.

I really like the colors, keep it up!!!

Sirithduriel
June 21st, 2006, 01:46 PM
I somehow seem stuck with my eyes in those lines in the background. The character is more like a contour placed before a lightsource..

Other than that, I absolutely love the colors and the design. I agree with a few people here, seeing the BG polished would be wonderful. But as is it looks VERY good.