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[El Chief]

try for a dynamic position. had some problems with her face, hope the lighting is more or less ok :) . painter 7
c&c welcome

http://www.godlessbeauty.de/gallery/ladyx.jpg

[chriswahl]

Hi

Nice painting.

A few comments...

The colour of the axehead seems to get lost in the sky. Also her legs seem to merge into her groin without any crotch area. And I think the purple glow is a bit overpowering, you should desaturate it a bit.

The backgorund buildings are very well done, great detail. Also the foreground area is great too.

Correct me if I'm wrong but it seems you're more comfortable drawing/painting architecture than people. Which isn't a crit, just an observation.

Very well done.:)

[WildSpruceMoose]

I see some great improvement. Especially since that first thread with that religious guy :P

The face is more natural, the pose is nicely dynamic too. As chris said she could probably use a bit more of a crotch, but overall nice work. I think the axe colouration the same as the sky and different in contrast to the rest of the character makes it seem like a very powerful weapon.

Again. Nice work ;)

[El Chief]

@chriswahl
thx and yes, you're probably right: i have more or less difficulties in painting characters, but i keep working on this problem and hopefully will solve it in the next few months :)

@wildsprucemouse
yeah the religious one...funny guy. thx for your comment, i'm glad that there's some improvement.

i did a crotch area (but quick) and will think about the other suggestions soon. again...muchas gracias

greets