Ink drawings for you and you mom

[Jacoboarbenz]

Here is a sketch page I have. I posted this in the sketchbook area but still no feed back . What do you all think? Materials consist of ink, watercolor, and conte.
http://img154.imageshack.us/img154/5053/pg20hr.jpg
http://img206.imageshack.us/img206/1962/pg12je.jpg