Self-portrait

[Ninja_ASSN]

Inside of me... :evilbat:

http://freeweb.siol.net/porenta5/avtoportret_gfx.jpg

[Ninja_ASSN]

Is it really so bad that noone wants comment it? :(
At least one or 2 C&C so I'll know on what to work next time...
Please? Or is it something else that bothers u?

[chriswahl]

Hi

It's a good drawing.

What did you use. Traditional, computer or a bit of both.

Some comments:

The eyes are too big. The rule to follow is- The space between the eyes should be the same width as one of the eyes. Even if their size is being exaggerated this rule should still be followed.

The hair and the hairline are a bit too uniform. A person's hairline isn't perfectly straight, and hair goes all over the place not just in one direction.

The ears look a bit too simple.

The scribble on the background looks a bit messy.

The devil's lips could be darker.



The horns look great. Love the texture.

The shading on the face looks good.


Keep posting.:)

[ill`Be]

i dont like them big round shiny eyes. they make the portrait look crappy.
i also dont like the idea of showing two faces of a man in this kinda way ;/ its just not too innovative.

[Ninja_ASSN]

Thank u very much chriswahl on posting such a critic! It helps a lot when I read what other ppl see in my work...

ill'Be: Not everyone loves everything :)

[Tanika]

I agree the eyes are too big and too close togeather, but I must note that I really love the style and the concept. ^^ The horns are wayyyy cool!