Need Some Commentz -__-

[benjiazn]

ITZ NOT REALLY FINISHED .... I GOT TIRED OF COLORING THIS PIC......... IM NOT REALLY GOOD AT COLORING AS I SAY B4 WIF ALL MY OTHER POSTS........ PLZZ GIVE ME SOME ADV N C&C'Z
http://atlas.imagemagician.com/images/islanderz/kooldudesupercolorxcopy.jpg
http://islanderz.250free.com/mtry01.jpg a preview of this clay modle!__!

[WildSpruceMoose]

Very nice colouring etc. I have one compisition problem though. The tear on his cloak, on his hood, right where his left eye should be looks at first glance to be an eye. Nothing big. Nice pic overall ;)

I think the picture would have more impact if that didn't stick out, so that people could look at the picture rather than be destracted by the hood rip.

[endregan]

some more details in the bg would be cool. if u didnt stop colouring and had more patience and worked at it this would turn out really well. go back at it in a bit and see what you can do. so far its really cool

[krayz]

It's a good start. You should continue.

Only a couple of things stick out to me..

The hands look too big and the closest forearm looks too long. The angle the forearm is at, you wouldn't see that much of the bicep either. The tricep would be the dominant muscle. The robe is too far up under his arm which makes it look like his arm is disconnected from his body and also making it look like he has no lat.

I would probably take the moon over to the right (next to the bird) and crop it from there. Or place the moon to just above the guy. I reckon it'd make it more interesting. Would give you less to worry about too if the picture was smaller.

This could turn out nice regardless, so don't give up! Just think of every picture as a learning experience. Knowledge you can take to your next pic.

Hope I helped.

[benjiazn]

thnkx for all the nice commentz... ill try to spend some more tym on this pic as i can....been workin all week got no tym to do much colorin.... n lately i been spendin most of my tymz sculptin....=) i just started some sculptures..hopefully ill put up some of those pic up here soon...oh yeah i also did one sculpture for this pic here!__-....but got no tym to finish it up! :p
..well anywayz thnkx for all ...
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[.cfb]

I think that his body could be less skinny, it looks quite small in comparison too his arms.

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CAPSLOCK = COCKSLAP, BTW.

[Phait]

Stop with the trendy/annoying Z's after every word.
Nice red X.