a selfportrait to learn

[behemot5]

approximately 20 min this morning.....a selfportrait....
http://thumbs.deviantart.com/300W-96A096/large/indyart/freehand/slketchmoi.jpg larger size (http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/slketchmoi.jpg)

[behemot5]

i'm trying to colorise it ....(with my mouse and photoshop)http://thumbs.deviantart.com/300W-96A096/large/indyart/freehand/autoportraitwithamousepart1.jpg
larger size (http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/autoportraitwithamousepart1.jpg)
if anyone have a comment......

[behemot5]

http://thumbs.deviantart.com/300W-96A096/large/indyart/freehand/autoportraitwithmouse2.jpg
larger size (http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/autoportraitwithmouse2.jpg)
can someone explain me the mistakes i done??
thanks a lot......

[poly_cube]

thats really sweet man- i guess my only crit would be: add an intresting background. and possibly the eyebrows need a little more fine tuneing. (goes from a light gray to a dark gray)

other than that you look like your on a great start

[behemot5]

thanks a lot....i'll work on the eyes... i tried to go on your website but it doesn't work ... i will try latter..
thanks a lot.....i had no knowledge about colors and search information eveywhere i can find it...

[behemot5]

what do you all think of it?

:(

[metalwinds]

the colors are very nice.. .im surprised you dont have much experience with color. proportionally, the nose is too long. the lips look flat, and i think some other areas could be worked more to get a greater sense of depth. i also suggest doing something with the backround.. .its distracting. nice work so far, keep it up.

[behemot5]

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/spawnangelofmymouse.jpg
the only things i know about colors are the ones i have read on the round table in this forum :-/
i will try to drawn more volumes on my portrait...thanks