A Little Creauture

[cass83]

Just a creature that I did out of my head yesterday. Did not really have a plan just drawing for fun but I think I can make this guy into some kind of amphibian like critter. I will try out fins gills and different textures like spots but I'm open to ideas. If anyone has any crits or feedback on anything I will appreciate it.

Also I just got a myspace where I got a little artwork on if anyone is interested. http://www.myspace.com/kevincassidy22

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c128/cass83/themudpuppy.jpg

[Fizz The Carbonated]

His right calf looks longer than the left one, and the forshortening on the "knee" on the right leg looks weird... It doesn't really read as being foreshortened, it just looks like his leg is broken.

You have very defined musculature on the left arm, but none on his right. I feel that overall the anatomy on his right side is lacking compared to that on his left.

I like the beginnings of the texture rendering you put into the knees and toes. It'd be nice to see that level of texture rendering in the whole creature.

Edited because I can't type today.

[Mamoth]

Excellent work over all but the left hand fingernail seem off. they "look" to the viewer while the top of his hand "look" slightly inward. The right arm could use more stucture. Folowing the body like he do, it seem to curve and bend as an extreme opposite to the other arm that look strong and define. I also guess you should remove the black line aver the right hand and arm. I love the face, make me think off an E.T that would gone wild ;p.

Mamoth

[cass83]

Fizz The Carbonated: Yes I was haveing alot of troublw with the right leg/knee (his left) and it is a little too long. I tried making it appear bigger because it is supposed to be a little in front. And yes, I've hardly touched his right arm there will be no black lines and it will be fully rendered and textured. This is like 60% Thank you for commenting.




Mamoth:You are right on about the nails good spot I missed that. Yeah I reminds me of ET too thanks!

[cass83]

Updated.
Did somework on his right arm and leg. I am not really sure if the legs and knees are correct yet. To me they still seem a little wonky. Please give me some crits if there are any on this. His legs and face need alot of attention but other than that I will start rendering and texturing soon. 75% done so crit away before it is too late and I move on to other ideas. Thanks everyone!