Triple check on pose!

[jordith]

There we go, I think this is a vast improvement after I decided to switch her arm. How's the proportions this time around?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v651/Jordith/aim.jpg

[PsycArtist]

I remember seeing this not too long ago, and I must say that I like this version much better. Though, she looks a bit too thick. I have a very simular stature to her, and I know that I'm not that thick. :P Just slim down her torso a bit (mainly on our right side, and I really do mean a bit) and she'll look much better! Also her breasts look off. Try lowering and rounding the forward one slightly and reducing the rear one slightly. Finally, her forward leg should rotated so the knee is facing toward our left.

I hope I'm clear enough for you to understand. If you need, I have a paintover ready to go. :)

[VashTheStampede]

the back leg looks a tad too small, even with perspective taken into acct.

[evildragonfire]

She is still really thick.