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Mr.Magnetichead
May 15th, 2003, 06:31 AM
Yeah I know i've been here since the first few days of this place starting up, but believe it or not i have never posted any of my work out of fear of being laughed at.

Anyway, this is a one hour piece that I just did in a lesson whilst bored.

It was referenced from a pic of a baby i found on google and was then painted in Photoshop with a mouse.:smirk:

Anyway please be kind.

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/New_Breed.jpg

Scotty
May 15th, 2003, 07:46 AM
WOW....it's like a dream, or being in the womb or something. I like it...nicely done.:)

R_M
May 15th, 2003, 07:54 AM
Smudge, smudge, smudge....
Did you use any filters?

weird vibes from this one. you should post more!

Mr.Magnetichead
May 15th, 2003, 08:23 AM
Originally posted by R_M
Smudge, smudge, smudge....
Did you use any filters?

weird vibes from this one. you should post more!

yeah the whole thing was bascially jumps blobs of color smudged and smeared into shape.

They I applied a 50% color burn with red in it.

R_M
May 15th, 2003, 08:58 AM
works very well for the hair outline!

krayz
May 15th, 2003, 11:53 AM
Looks nice. But I think you probably overdid it with the smudge. Just my opinion.

Abulawn
May 15th, 2003, 01:24 PM
Great work.I love the eyes, they show great expression!
Post more...:)

amphex
May 15th, 2003, 06:40 PM
First Thought:
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This piece has some promise, but falls apart in trying too hard to be "creative".
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The mood is very odd, but enjoyable, and the form definitions are interesting and creative. In the babies face, I like it very much how the right eye bleeds into the rest of the face..unintentional or not, it is a nice touch.

Unfortunately, I feel that the smudging is very over-used, and makes it seem almost as if you did to mask something. It has the potential to be novel (in the good sense), but, in my opinion, simply comes off as tacky.

Keep up the good work.
I look forward to seeing more from you.

John P.
May 16th, 2003, 10:14 AM
Hi pal.

Sorry for not commenting on this before, but I haven't been here for a loong time, 'cause I haven't done anything myself.

As for the piece, I like the atmosphere you've managed to create, and as for the crits above I can partly agree, but on the other hand, if you had done pretty much the exact same thing on canvas with oil, you'd have gotten better crits. So what I'm trying to say is that perhaps the crits are a bit unfair based on the fact that this is a digital work.

But then i guess I'm a bit biased myself, since I know you. ;)

Anyway - I like it.


Keep up the good work!

I'll try and submit something new myself soon. :)

zhuzhu
May 16th, 2003, 10:50 AM
painted in Photoshop with a mouse?

very nice!

Chromo48
May 17th, 2003, 01:09 AM
I enjoy it immensely! The colors are the perfect choice for this subject, the only other choice I could think of would be a golden sort of look and the way you utilized the smudge tool on the pic reminds me of things growing, reaching out to new areas, like veins. I really like the expression on the face, he looks like an old soul. Really awesome.