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[kenny709394]

Hi guys, I am a beginner of 2D drawing in photoshop, so here is painting to get some constructive critis, please don't be too hard on me. hehe

http://pm709394.no-ip.com/pm/kenny/pinup_hiv3_web.jpg

[Geophillyx]

thats really good, especially for a beginner, awesome job! keep at it!

[Mecha Hate Chimp]

I gotta agree, for a beginner, you have a really nice image going. Only crit would be the arms and hands, specifically the right arm/hand. I think they could be defined a little better. Good work overall.

[Noah Bradley]

Nice stuff. I like the texture on the couch and you've got a pretty good sense of light going on. Here's a few crits... hope they're not too harsh. :)

Arm lengths are different... her right (our left) is noticeably shorter. The face, though nicely rendered, seems flat and/or detached.

Just a few things. Good work, though.

[theincredibleandy]

Like they said, you have some fun paint effects like soft skin vs. chunky folds vs. bristly background. You need to stay diligent with your drawing, though. Right now the anatomy is wrong in every possible way, especially since no body parts connect properly. (face is okay though.) Just make sure your drawing is okay next time, because bad drawings are so distracting that we can't give a proper technique. Capisce?