Another one

[Edli]

She is suposed to be Kelly from the Halo books but I messed somethings up and ended a beautiful and long hair girl. She is suposed to look like a cyber girl, not a top model one. Well anyway, this is rough and quick, I was trying to play with the metal effect more then her face.
Criticism is welcome.

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/6531/kelly9yh.jpg

[Mokuu]

Yo, i really like the pose but the rendering itself doesnt fell as solid as it could be. Maybe its the figure's lighting, or the tone gradiation not producing that "metal effect". You know what i mean?

[evildragonfire]

That is pretty good for quick-n-dirty. Keep refining it! :) You could add some emotion to her face also to match the pose. It also seems to me that the "armor" on her leg (stepping forward) does not match, it seems to get lost in the knee area, the top portion is actually rotating around her leg at the wrong angles. Other than that.............keep refining, you are doing good :)

[dogfood]

'cause this is thriller, thriller night
There aint no second chance against the thing with forty eyes
You know its thriller, thriller night
You're fighting for your life inside of... killer, thriller toniiiiiiight

Tell me she isn't dancing.

The pose is odd and she's wearing man-armor, but there are some nice things about this one. The feet aren't any of these. The reflections, however, are coming off surpirsingly well in several places. The face, unfortunately, isn't coming off well in any places.

I think EDF may have it: keep going.