Character sketch

[danica]

This is my first post, here's a character I've been working on...Tell me what you think! http://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g259/dcs_stuff/char.jpg

[Pixeldragoon]

Not really enough development right now to crit...

COuld you downsize the pic to maybe 500 pixels width? Not like there's much detail...

EDIT: THe hair is very lively, but it needs a feminine touch. The back one looks like a dude, no offense. Maybe a bow or some p'tails or somethin.

[Darktwin]

lines seem to be scratchy, you should do some exercises from time to time making long sweeping strokes on the paper, first start with straight lines then sweeping lines, then start to to practice creating form with a few sweeping lines, I have a problem also with scratchy lines so I'm right there with you. Keep at it, what you have is looking good.

[danica]

Thanx :)

[kais]

I like the poses of the characters, really nice. Only one thing bugs me, the woman's head, I feel it's a bit off, be if that was intended, then I apologize :)
keep working on it, I like where it's going