i want cruel crit to my pic

[keun-chul]

i'm painting this picture in recent
i need some crit to draw this picture
i need impetus
because i'm neglectful in recent
http://myhome.hanafos.com/~jkc1982/images/darkness.jpg

[Fozzybar]

I rip you apart Mister :)

The feet are too large regarding the perspective...downward the size of the body parts should decrease because the viewer looks from the top (compare feet and head size)

The clouds seem too small compared with the character...it takes much from the "cool char in center of storm"-effect, which you want to achieve i suppose...

The contrast of the clouds seem to hard, they get much of the viewers attention, though it's not necessary i think. Maybe some fading or desaturation...

I guess you want to show how his cloak is flattering in the wind...I would give the clothing a dynamic form, instead using a blur style...so the cloaks part on his upper body isn't realistic...it's too tight...

The head and the fur around his neck is very good...the best part in my eyes...

[keun-chul]

thanks you Fozzybar
i allways want keen crits
your crits gave me some energy for work
i hope that i want to have sharp eyes
thanks

[MindCandyMan]

Yeah the feet and the legs are definitely too big. Also the rock could use more texture added to it. Something about just having one bright orange cloud doesn't seem right. Maybe if a little bit of orange was added to the surrounding clouds it would make it a little less easier on the eye...perhaps just do what fozzy said...desaturate it. I would add something onto the head of the guy to draw our eye there...not sure if you should brighter highlights...I have no idea but something to draw our eye there. Maybe also if you had some dynamic lighting it would be good. You know how trees only allow certain patches of light to come through it would be awesome if the clouds were kind of acting like that on this figure. Great image definitely post an update. Looks awesome!

[Tedsuo]

I like your colors!


I think your composition needs work. I would like to know what he's standing on. I know it's a rock, but where is it? I see nothing but sky below him...


Also, the lower clouds do not look like they are circling the rock. They look like they are making a circle behind the rock. The higher clouds are pretty, but do not add to the composition. They should frame the character better I think.

Hope that helps!

[Wrath_of_Dog]

Alright you arrogant son of a german shepard! When you ask for "cruel crit" with a piece like this is underhanded bragging. Now simmer down and ask for people to complement you like everyone else. And add more detail to the lower half of the guy. :grumble: