Angel, The X-man, and no, not the shitty dude from the movie...

[ArtistWannabe]

THis is a pic i just finished in honor of the real angel, that is blue, and is really freankin cool. this movie is shit on toast, oficially, so i can't let my characters down when they most need me! any critiques will be appreciated and applied to later pieces ^^

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v219/josephwannabe/angel-flight.jpg

-AW

[JERI]

I personally think the perspective of his body and the background skyscrapers look good. The wings I can't say for certain though.

Looking forward to the updates on this one.

[JFS]

Solid perspective, but I'm worried about the wings aswell.
I think his right arm should be less paralell to his left. Maybe move his left arm a bit more outwards to the right side of the pic? I'm not sure though :)

[~Faust~]

The curves the skyscrapers are aligned on give the impression that this is just a fraction of a bigger picture. Making it look more scetchy consequently.

[ArtistWannabe]

well, to JERI, i kinda see what you mean about the wings, i'm having trouble with that, since this counts as the first official image that i make of a dude with wings... its a good first try, and i'll try to apply what you say in future images...

(i knew i shoulda done superman instead.)

to Scrawneh, the arms do look abit odd now that you mention it. i'll see what i can do about it. thanks for the help. ^^

and to faust, is what you said a good thing or a bad thing, cuz, i wanted this pic to look sketchy, and if you said that, it should be a good, thing, but you pointed it out as if its a critique.

[~Faust~]

I just didn't know if you intended those lines to be curves. Cause they do work with the perspective.

[ArtistWannabe]

oh... yeah, thats kinda what i wanted to do with the pic. ^^;