lady.....

[quantas]

this is something in progress. don't know if it is worth finishing

http://www.wwdillustration.com/images/newgirl.jpg

-q

[rubygenesis]

oh my gosh yes, finish it! its got style, looks nice and loose and the colors work, its warm:)

[killing.people]

that is looking great! i love that feel in your .. paintings - you use painter right quantas?

[quantas]

killing.pepl.....

hi. actually , i don't use painter. just PS6. thanks for the comments though. i need the encouragement. i really wan't to work on composition more than just individual figures though. i am tired of just drawing single people. i guess it is because i don't do any work on paper at the moment.

anyways, thanks for the crit.

-q

[rubygenesis]

well then put some people in the background! :D

[MolvaDo]

i think you are the one who needs to decide if its worth your time to finish. it has appeal. but the face needs work, it is off or something. maybe its the hair. anyhow like your other work

[quantas]

maybe you could be a bit more specific as to why you think the face is off. I thought the face was pretty danged okay. that might be prejudice or it just might be years of practice and artistic knowledge, i don't know. be more specific in your critique please.....

-q

[MolvaDo]

well it has something to do with the chin and the back cheek there is also something with the lips they don't follow the same perspective as the eyes and nose. It looks and though her face is concave. The application of the color and depth of the character is great but something with the face makes it look deformed it could be the eye as well. where xactly is the iris and pupil? which way is she looking? Also just looking at it I see that the middle of the lips is not centered with the nose. the line of the middle of the lips goes up her nostril. Yeah that is it the bottom of the face needs to be redone, it is not in alignment.