Seres Victoria

[raiden]

A semi-finished sketch of Seres Victoria, the main character of Hellsing. I'm kinda new here, so go easy.

http://www.liquidsketchbook.com/images/victoria.jpg

comment if you like

[davi]

looks good.
nice boobs.

i'm not very good at criting manga/toon styled art because it doesn't please me much,but some tips i could give is... with pencil i would stay stick mostly to line art and try to work in details with that isntead of shading with the pencil. Learning how to color on the computer would be a good step, which can be done with ease if you have a mouse since you can just do cel-shading. Besides that i really like the form of the figure, but the arm to the left of the figure extends way paste the hips which isn't usually the case.

[nil]

wicked, i heard theyre working on a second series :evilbat:

if i was you i would extend the drawing up to include her whole arm and the sword(?) that shes holding, i think it would make it moer interesting

[raiden]

thanks Davi, comments make sense. i'll get to work on it a bit more. btw, i can color on the computer, i just havent gotten a chance to post any of it. The arm does look off, now that you've mentioned it. hmm...