pictures of some flowers

[marlboro]

took these pictures for fun



http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e168/empr0/DSCN1027edited.jpg

http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e168/empr0/DSCN0986.jpg

[claudeEGYPT]

First piece of advice.. get rid of the date.

First is nice.. but doesnt communicate any message to me.. so i guess it doesnt do its job.

Second is over exposed, this one has more composition than the previous photo and thus does a better job at conveying a message to the onlooker.

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