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rheg
May 17th, 2006, 04:51 AM
i need crits and whatnot of some stuff on my site, because i plan on starting a portfolio there... http://ryanheggem.com/bin/

please please take a moment, i'd really like to know if i should keep throwing things in on the page for people to look at or throw ideas and crits my way...

here are some latest examples...

http://ryanheggem.com/dd/config2-pencil.jpg
http://ryanheggem.com/dd/sketchbook1.jpg
http://ryanheggem.com/dd/config2-colour.jpg
http://ryanheggem.com/dd/sean1.jpg

thank you for your time,

~r

voraz
May 17th, 2006, 05:18 AM
Well first of all I think you have to finish stuff more, these are very rough sketches, and I think you should aim for more finished stuff in a portfolio.
Try to work some more on them and use references for stuff like the gun in the last sketch, that you seem to be having problems with.

dogfood
May 17th, 2006, 07:09 AM
These do provoke interest, but voraz is right- from reference, more finished, more, more, more.