is my stuff interesting?

[rheg]

i need crits and whatnot of some stuff on my site, because i plan on starting a portfolio there... http://ryanheggem.com/bin/

please please take a moment, i'd really like to know if i should keep throwing things in on the page for people to look at or throw ideas and crits my way...

here are some latest examples...

http://ryanheggem.com/dd/config2-pencil.jpg
http://ryanheggem.com/dd/sketchbook1.jpg
http://ryanheggem.com/dd/config2-colour.jpg
http://ryanheggem.com/dd/sean1.jpg

thank you for your time,

~r

[voraz]

Well first of all I think you have to finish stuff more, these are very rough sketches, and I think you should aim for more finished stuff in a portfolio.
Try to work some more on them and use references for stuff like the gun in the last sketch, that you seem to be having problems with.

[dogfood]

These do provoke interest, but voraz is right- from reference, more finished, more, more, more.