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Killer Napkins
May 12th, 2003, 05:03 PM
this is a pic i did for this battle thing.. im almost done with it now.. but this is just the sketch of it.. ill be finished in a little while then i post the finished thing up later.. tell me what u think.. i know the veins look a little steroidy but ull understand in the end.. i call him metal man because his blood is metal i dunno why ha.. crit and comment welcome

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/Killa_Mcgee.jpg
MattyMoo
May 12th, 2003, 05:09 PM
thats actaully goodstuffman. i really like it. keep it up
Chaser226
May 12th, 2003, 06:43 PM
Check out some anatomy books and see how the mucsles work together. You got the torso pretty well, though the abs look kind of off perspective wise. I would say you have to work on your arms more, specially the one on our right, the elbow shouldn't be off to the side in this view.
Killer Napkins
May 12th, 2003, 07:36 PM
oh ur right
MattyMoo
May 12th, 2003, 07:42 PM
well ur right the muscles r a lil off but i like the abs i think it makes it ur own character i also think the torso is pretty good other than that yea its coo stuff
DoomSkull
May 13th, 2003, 02:35 PM
yegah tenacious D quotes
Aidan
May 13th, 2003, 03:53 PM
I think also the head, especially the mouth needs more work. Looks out of perspective to me...

And could you tell me what you mean with "abs"?
Sorry, i cant imagine what thats supposed to be...
MattyMoo
May 13th, 2003, 04:42 PM
aiden his abdominale muscles dont u c teh bulgeing mucles there.yea i think there fine
Killer Napkins
May 13th, 2003, 09:20 PM
hmm ill take ur guys' advice.. well except for the guy that doesnt know what abs are...ha just kiddin.. thanks!
MattyMoo
May 14th, 2003, 02:04 PM
sorry w/e u guys think but il say his ab mucsles r coo
Aidan
May 14th, 2003, 03:05 PM
Hey, look at my home country! dont know about all your abbreviations...
Whatever, his "abs" would be more stretched in this pose and those arent...soo, get anatomy books! ;)

Anyway the drawing is cool.
deviousg
May 14th, 2003, 07:21 PM
you might wanrt to look at line weights - alot of that is penciled in.

You can never have enough anatomy.
Killer Napkins
May 14th, 2003, 08:01 PM
yeah.. hey dude check it out now its finally finished!.. got the same name its hard to miss.. then tell me what u think with the shading on it.. ill study more anatomy
thanks!