Claire Redfield/Soldier

[odin]

Hi, i`ve made two pictures (the linearts are from my brother)

Claire Redfield from Resident Evil (idea by J`MLEE TH):
http://home.arcor.de/editor-areade/pics/claire%20redfield.jpg

Soldier (idea from craig mullins (http://www.goodbrush.com/gallery/sketches/calvary ))
http://home.arcor.de/editor-areade/pics/robo%20wallpaper%201024x768.jpg


I am very new in this business. These are my first two works, so have indulgence :)

bye,
odin

[odin]

:wazzup:

Can you please say anything to the pictures?
:chainsaw: :nono:

[Fozzybar]

Haha...impatient, aren't we?

What could i say, personally i don't like renderings which are made mainly with the airbrush tool...you should think of structure and texture when coloring. Not just light and shadow as you did...the material of the areas is very important to achieve a good rendering.

[Clodhopper]

I think the line work in the second one looks pretty slick. but alot is lost in the color version. I think you need brighter highlights, and some specularity on those metal tubes. you lose so much detail in the face also cause its so dark...The chick looks good but the pen lines are just too thick and heavy- most of strokes are unneccasary too i think, specially on the arms and legs. you obviously have slick pen skills, I hope you post more linework.

[Mr.Magnetichead]

That Redfield pic is an exact copy of the pic inside the tpb of Resident Evil.

J00 are a naughty boy!