Mercenary concept

[rakot]

A concept of a mercenary warrior I made for my personal project. Draw it with pencil.

http://www.geocities.com/yankleiman/portfolio/personal/per_merc.txt

Bring it on! :)

[Triton]

Nice work!!! The shading looks really good :)

[behemot5]

it seems the front leg is a little bit too long...

[rakot]

thanks guys

[SpazzoLemealn_99]

hey, u do ur stuff like me, i only use graphite and no backgrounds so far, loving it, you really got the shading just like metal looks. i give it an 8.7

[Zwalharulzuki]

Very nice, but his right side limbs dont match his left. Left side should be elongated, or the right shortened. Beside the proportional issues, it's a very nice piece.

[dogfood]

Like the others have mentioned: long shanks. But this is quite good. I especially like the legs (good thing they're so long). I would like to see the chest mesh in more with the style of the legs. They look to be totally different types of armor (which may have been your intent). Also, while subtle, the line from pinky knuckle to index knuckle is not a straight line.
Nice work.

[BlueMech]

his hnd not holding the halberd(?) looks like a steel lump. But otherwise its awesome.

[rakot]

Thanx for the comments. Yes I know the hand looks like a lump, but I dont want fix it, cause the mistakes I do are like indicators of my progress.