espionage(updated)

[foofoo]

concept of an espionage in suit.......stealth suit maybe. Done in painter and photoshop......with a mouse.
http://www.angelfire.com/alt/foofoo/images/man.jpg
crits are very much welcomed.

[Goo]

anatomy-wise...both legs looks kinda weird. it looks good overall, but needs more definition. try using more variations of shadows and lights, as the piece looks like its using only the strongest and lightest values of lighting.

[foofoo]

hehe. Its always either u or jia yi who reply to me first... and not even after 1 hour after posting my work this time...

But for telling me its wierd, it aint helping me much if u dun tell me y issit wierd? Sorry but i'm lousy in anatomy and i need more guidance.........

Thx for replying anyway.

[Goo]

hehe..its kinda hard to put what i had in mind in words.....but i'll try. the poportion of the left leg(length of thigh) and the foreshortening of both legs could be worked on. if this still sounds greek to you, i'll point it out in skool. too bad i'm too darn-arsed lazy to open my ps7 and show it to you:D

[foofoo]

http://www.angelfire.com/alt/foofoo/images/man2.jpg

[Cat]

Looks better, but still blurry..
Try to define more.. looks a bit unfinished.
I dont think there's something wrong with the leg anatomy wise though =^-^'=

[Zakarian]

i think this wat goo had in mind was that his left leg(our right), seems a bit too short.

also, the shading done on that leg seems a bit ambiguous. i cant really tell which way the knee is facing. seems to be facing the side, but the direction of the foot suggests that it might be pointing 3/4 frontwards. also, i think the calf seems to jut out at the bottom of the thigh and does not continue naturally from the thigh.

well, this is wat i thought when i looked at the legs.

[foofoo]

i hope this looks like a more finished version and the issue on the leg is more or less corrected.

Not much responses. Maybe its the concept or the way i paint or both. Maybe i'm jus not good enuf......

Thanks to those who bothered to crit...

[DragonGX]

IT would be hard to sneak around with lights sticking out of your entire body.. jsut a thought.. :)

[foofoo]

hehe. those blue light bulb sort things all over his body doesn't give off light. They are stealth devices.

.....rite now stealth mode is off......

[Zakarian]

wat do those blue things do when stealth mode is on? hehe....maybe you could do another pic showing him when stealth mode is on...hehe just a thought...

but i'm pretty curious about those blue things and wat they do when stealth mode is on.

[gorilla777]

i agree with the comments made previously. it would be cool to see this when stealth mode is actually on. if you hadn't said anything about it, it looks exactly the opposite of an espionage suit, and more like a "here i am shoot me suit." good sketch though :)