"SilenceStage" character design

[solidgrafi]

my one of wip's woman character Poeta from illustration book "Silence Stage "
tells a fiction theme about weird public drama theater in the town that tells in the story.
this piece just only adds some touch ups

ok enjoy :)




http://www.geocities.com/solidgrafi/poeta.jpg

or Page links : http://www.deviantart.com/view/32961449/

[Infinit]

wow ince one
just spend as much time on the rest of the figure as you did on the face

nothing to crit so far

[miljenko]

wow ince one
just spend as much time on the rest of the figure as you did on the face

nothing to crit so far


In my opinion, if he went on adding as much detail to the body, the overall picture might end up looking abit stiff. This way, face remains the focal point. Truly, it draws immediate attention. Excellent work! :)

[glyph]

Yeah... It could stand alone as finished, I think. Plus the motion from the bottom up, being purposefully rough and "rising" up the pic to her face where finished highlights and subtleties are seen, adds to the "rise" effect and her "wings"...

I guess I could pull ol' nitpicky out here and say the hand holding the paper and her fore arm look a tad "unconnected"... and I'd like to see a little more definition to the ambiguity of the ears.

a Beautiful, Beautiful Piece... CHEERS!

[Chingwa]

This is very pretty. The warm colors... the imaginative costume.. excellent work! My only crit would be it seems like her legs are not in proportion to the rest of her. Her thighs need to be a bit thicker and longer and I'm wanting to see her feet soooo bad! :D

I also think a few cast shadows would do wonders for this piece, such as a shadow fallign across her lower body from the extended arm, onto her upper neck/shoulders from her head, and on her left arm from the rest of her body. It just seems a bit flat.

[solidgrafi]

many thanks :)
everyone give the best c&c in here
very construct ,
i'll post the progress..