burial ground

[El Chief]

nothing much to tell about it...
c&c welcome

http://www.godlessbeauty.de/gallery/burialground.jpg

[tyboogie]

coool concept----

i think it could be pushed even further

if you opened up a bigger window to show us much more of the landscape,( like a widescreen format) not to stretch what youve doen but add alot of space on each side to show us the EPIC -ness of teh landscape

then you could really go to town on having millions of graves going off into eternia

also the sky could be more dramatic with more variation

the composition at this point is top 3rd is sky, middle 3rd is mountains, and bottom 3rd is Foreground mountains--- i think you could make this comp more interesting by having a little more push and pull between these elements

right now my eyes sorta goes horizontally back and forth between these 3rds

i hop ei ve made sense---keep it up--ty



aslo--the foreground shows depth

but when you get to where the sky and BG maountains meet it flattens

i like the color of teh BG maountains but hte sky feels like it could have a smoother transition into that intense peachy color--also the sky could use alot more depth

[El Chief]

@tyboogie
thx man. i really appreciate your suggestions. right now i have not enough time to make the pic larger, but i'll try to fix the other things you mentioned.

thx & greets