This is my first time...

[Hitsys]

Hi!
This is my firts time :D , don't be so cruel with me.
Well, I was dreaming one day and here it is my dream
:D.
I would like make it in colour but I don't feel so confident because I don't know how to start :D
http://comeol.hosteol.com/~thecragor/Nena-y-guardiana-.jpg


PS: I am very sorry if my English isn't good enough but I am an Spanish girl ;) .

[Gum]

wonderfu:p

[Wolvie]

Very nice =)

I think there is something wrong about her left arm, or maybe it's just me :P

[Hitsys]

Wich one?
Do you mean the warrion arm or the arm of the other girl?

(Anyway you are right ;) )

[donkeyslayer]

hola, es muy bien para ver personas que hablan español. lo siento, porque no tengo un keyboard con accentos. me gusta la idea de ese dibujo. no puedo ver que son los brazos de quien. es un puquito "confusing" (lo siento, me español es.... un poquito malo :D).

SALCHICHAS!!

:D

[Gum]

Originally posted by donkeyslayer
SALCHICHAS!!

:D


:D

[Bloodstone]

Esto es un cuadro muy bueno..

There are some slight anatomy errors that were already mentioned, but those can be easily fixed. I'd definitely do that before painting this. I can't wait to see it in color! Maybe plan out a background first too. :)

[Hitsys]

Thank you for all your advice, I will try fix the anatomy problems :p , and paint it.

Your spanish is very good Donkeyslayer (and I can say that te accent doesn't matter because I don't have nothing in my keyboard as well :D )

Bloodstone... a background? It is a good idea, but I don;et know what kind of background, are you thinking in something?

And Gum, Sumsum!!!!!;) :D

[Tanika]

*rolls in and uncurls* :3 I believe the background should be something a little mystical or whimsical to match the flow of the two figures, but not subtract from it. Perhaps flowers or a forest of some sort? A castle even, if drawn correctly it would really be nice.

Just some ideas I'm throwing out! XD I'm more of an abstract background type, but for this piece I'd use something more flowing. :3 It's very nice, your pencil strokes are smooth and firm. :) My hands are too shakey to keep a perfect line.

[Miguel]

ai zinc ih veri biutifuh yor draguin beibi camon... guou

yu ar e grit artish

SALCHICHAS!

:rolleyes:

[wolf99]

I think its a cool pic.

The way he holds the sword looks realy cool,reminds me of some issue of Blade of the immortal

[Balton]

you know what confuses me?
this looks like a typical long haired dream prince warrior holding his loved one... but "he" seems to have breasts. so its a strong girl holding a petit girl. right?
btw. aren't "salchichas" sausages? Down in the toscana(italy) where I am often salchichas are speciality. veeery delicious :) wish I could get the originals here in berlin.

[Hitsys]

Thanks to everyone.

Tanika: I am thinking in something for the background.

Migué: "Zankius veri mach. Yo ar betta artist dan mi. Se yo sun."

Wolf: That is so cool from you

Balton: you are right, in the picture there are two girls. One is a warrior that belong a very, very old civilization. Her mission is protect the little girl, only human, that it is very importante for the futere world.

Do you like the story?:D ;)

I like Salchichas :D