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kidcrucial
May 8th, 2003, 01:54 PM
Hi, I think this is my first official post here. I could use some feedback on this as I have been staring at it for a week. I am pleased with it though.
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/Senate_house.jpg
gallon
May 9th, 2003, 04:52 AM
Hi!
I think you should show the ground. I know that is probably har right now, because you coulored it and the sketch is on a different paper and so on. But maybe you have your vanishing point somewhere in the drawing.
Right now it's looking a bit awkward. Why don't you show the ground/entrance area? It's a bit like showing a portrait and crop the image below the forehead....don't make sense :).
Right now it's hard to tell if the perspectives off or not...just because you don't show the floor.
General tips could be to darken the shadows.
Why is the corner so highlighted when the sides doesn't show any of that light?
It could also use some windóws or something else to give a bit mopre detail.
Nice picture, I hope you see this as constructive :)
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