Futuristic City WIP

[anjin]

hi everyone!
I am working on this futiristic city illustration. I think to add later some flying veichles and lights, but any comment and critics is welcome!

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y161/anjin75/SpaceCityDimWIP001.jpg

Thank you in advance! :)

[anjin]

well... this is the update of the work in progress! I am not happy about this work... I would like to receive some critics and comments. Thank you everybody in advance! :)

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y161/anjin75/SpaceCitydimWIP002.jpg

[GentleFood3]

This is urban planning from hell. If this is a future so advanced as to have blurry robot bunny assassins that take up the foreground, wouldn't they know better than to divert all the city's traffic into one big parking garage?

If it wasn't labeled "Futuristic City", I wouldn't have known what it was. I can't tell what the big pylon things are, and I can't tell that's traffic on the streets. I also don't know why those big struts are in the foreground.The perspective is wonky too. Touch up the streets on the top right.

Hope I wasn't too harsh or anything

edit: I guess another big issue is: why is there a killer bunny in the first place?

[Egets]

AAHHHAHHAAHAHAAAA !!! SORRY ABOUT LAUGHING BUT...

It is really hard to say what is wrong in this image but most of all its not pleasing to the eye, and that is the mere purpose of an image is to look nice and comfortable to look at

I think the general thumb of rule is not to force yourself to draw something that you dont have a clear vision, maybe you dont have enough experience in drawing and such and you just jumped into too ambitious topics already, I know how frustrating it is but there is really no shortcut to becoming a good artist you just have to crawl through the narrow hard way to pile up your skills

Basically I feel like that this is yet too much for you to handle at the level of your experience so work on little less ambitious projects and it will pile up to you until one day you will look at this pic and know within you why its not good

[JFS]

^ what Egets said (except i didn't laugh :) ).
I like the little flying fellow. Maybe you can have some fun drawing him more detailed and standalone? Don't worry about grandeur environments to put him in, for now.

[Charlie_2.0]

Same here, the environment isn't friendly at all. Reminds me of one of those scenes back in '98 where there was an excess of blue in them(and in general cold or depressing colors) which simply made you feel unconfortable. Try to redo the picture with warm colors....maybe that'll work, but I dunno what can be said of the details, and the whole pic is very poor.

[anjin]

thank you to everybody, I were not happy with the work in progress so I already knew that the work was not good. Hummm I am continuing to work on it just to study on it. It is my first environment without a solid basic pencil (like the ones in my sketchbook) and I were trying to work only with a very very rough pencil sketch and colors. it's evident that it's not my style or I am not good enough at this point fot it. :( Hummm Anyway... I will continue to post the next steps, I hope that evrybody you'll can continue to comment it!
Thank you guys!