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eraser
April 23rd, 2006, 12:53 PM
Hi guys!I just starred to draw more seriously about 4 weeks ago and I found this place.I knew of deviantart but I was never interested in posting my stuff there...some of them are done with the mouse cause I just got a wacom 2 weeks ago..anyways here's some of my stuff

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/9700/ultra9vr.jpg

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/4721/kenmasters0jt.jpg

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/2545/clown5zf.jpg

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/8373/bigmouth0cn.jpg

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/9150/lordofdarkness3mj.jpg

hope you like it,crits are welcomed

eraser
April 23rd, 2006, 12:56 PM
http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1811/arwing2vh.jpg

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/9816/unrest0rn.jpg

http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1052/collected5hq.jpg

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/7453/fireinthesky2gw.jpg

Halos Chain
April 23rd, 2006, 04:42 PM
ohh wow, your styles quite vivid. :D as for crits, the anatomy in first few pics seems off a smidge. *not taking into fact the extremly long legs er w/e because its kinda obvious thats what you were going for* good job with the skin textures on the next to last one, quite realistic. also, that flying vehicle seems a bit rushed with too much of the line drawing showing, its good stuff though, keep kickin. : )

GentleFood3
April 23rd, 2006, 06:36 PM
Some pretty solid stuff. The exaggerated legs in the first piece don't work for me. They just don't seem to fit with everything else. The last three are my favorites, though the hair on the stapled/stitched chick seems too undefined compared to the great skin textures. The wings in the last piece suffer from the same problem in my opinion; they just look unfinished. I'd like to see more of your work.

Genjuu
April 23rd, 2006, 08:49 PM
They are all good, but the clown faced scary guy's black-tee is not showing any detail of light, shadow, or texture.

savion
April 24th, 2006, 10:03 AM
I'd have to agree that the legs dont look right on the top character. Even if you were going for something Hellsing-ish it just still looks off.

However, I do like the guy in the suit with the mask, and the tattoos are pretty nice on the last one you posted.

dogfood
April 24th, 2006, 12:49 PM
I think the medium is getting in the way of a lot of what you're doing. You're taking figures with poor anatomy and polishing them with a diamond chammy.

I would recommend alotting a greater percentage of your time studying anatomy and figuring out where muscles go and how bodies move. I'd also attack hands like they were jelly doughnuts stuffed with money.

And while you're avoiding dodge and burn like they were leperous polka players, check out Prom's tutorial (http://www.itchstudios.com/psg/art_tut.htm). He does a great job showing some fundementals about light and color.

I think you've got a lot going, with some nice drama and emotion, but I think a couple of the above comments were trying to be nice to your drawings, while I think it's better to be nice to the artist.

Jason Rainville
April 24th, 2006, 01:49 PM
I think the medium is getting in the way of a lot of what you're doing. You're taking figures with poor anatomy and polishing them with a diamond chammy

Now that you mention it, I whole-heartedly agree. At first I thought the last one was one of the best of the bunch, until I realized her arms lacked any defenition and her hands were drawn out...

Another vote for 'work on anatomy.'