updated pencil sketches(nudity content)

[michael see]

here's another 3 i've did for the figure class assignment.scanned twice as the drawing is in A3 sizes and the last pic is even larger..i have resized all three and so..hope u guys wouldn't mind as the quality of the pics res dropped.
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/181051/figures5.jpg
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/181051/figure6.jpg
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2003-5/181051/figure7.jpg

crits and comments appreciatted~thanx and enjoy the thread:)

[sic1]

Well, I would respond, but apparently you're over your bandwidth limits Mike! :)

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[michael see]

ohh sorry for exceeded the limit..i'll try to post one at a time next time:)thanx for reminding

[Rohan]

hey really nice stuff man, I'm surprised you havent got a response as such yet, are they all from photo refs? the tonal separation is really good (by that I mean generally the tones blend together nicely but clearly define the form and the strokes have a nice unfussed clean look about them. my sketches are rarely as clean. On the crit side, my initial impressions are that in the first one, the line used to describe where the model's left clavicle meets her shoulder or acromioclavicular joint (just saying it for my own benefit :)) seems to draw too much attention away from the face and seems a bit heavy in weight(relative to adjacent areas of importance) I haven't seen the source but the expression in her face is great. draws me in :)

The area in shadow below her face is a bit confusing as the tones jump up and down a bit near the contours of her right arm and jawline. In the second, the model's nipples seem to be pointing near the same direction which doesnt seem very natural and her left breast seems a little tense compared to the right(not sure about this havent seen the ref). All that said these are just my impressions and I'm only trying to push you further by picking at this stuff, which is what I really could have done with a few years ago when I was studying. I think you've done a really good job overall. The Composition of all three is simple and pleasing. I like the way you've handled the fabric, simplified nicely. keep up the good work and hope to see more of your stuff :) hope this helps
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[behemot5]

really like your pics.... did they were drawing by nature ????

[AmadorL]

Dude these are the shit! I really like the last one. You should post more. And that's a nice dancer !

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[sic1]

Wow, I'm glad I came back. These are excellent! The contrast in the first one is really nice ;)

[dilation]

very nice mark making

[michael see]

hey guys..thanx for all the pleasing words as well as the crits and comments..i've learn alot from u guys though:)again,thax alot..i'll go improve on the suggestion u guys fed.
post more soon

[shinji-eva01]

It looks like these are from photos...is this correct?

[michael see]

indeed it was from references:)