corre lola corre 2096

[Lesak]

hi, i made this in photoshop cs2, after i finish it i choose the name hehe
its like a female android, i wanted to make a strong contrast betwin black and red.. hope u like it =)



.. sorry if my english sux hehe

http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/4661/correlolacorre20905za.jpg

[Spacetoy]

Hi Lesak

I like the movie poster imagery and layout!

I feel the andriods waist looks too small and weak - easily breakable.

Also lighting needs to be consistent - you have light from above shining on her forward leg, but the lower part of the leg has a stong light from below

I would also experiment with different visual intensities as this is the same level, line weight and colour throughout - I think that will help depth more.

I hope this helps - keep it up

[Shamagim]

Hey :)

Remmember, speculars are actually one or more light bulb thingys that reflet in a determined direction, you can´t just put them everywere.

In general, your rendering skills are good, but you need to undestand light; Plus you still have the hardest things to master, "foreshortening", "Color", etc....but you will be there in no time, just keep it up :)

[Corel Painter IX]

wow. I think the rendering/texturing is really good. I don't know 'bout the andriod.

[Lesak]

wow thank u guys for the crits and comments.. i appreciate them a lot!
i´m trying to learn how to use lights in metalic or shiny surfaces.. but its so &/%/ hard! hahahha ... but i love it anyway !! i think i´ll try to study more abouth realistic light sources and stuff.... again thank u guys a lot..

by the way.. spacetoy.. your works are awasome!

[JörgenGiftmördaren]

you need to study anatomy and shun the dodge/burn tools like the plague. nice work on the movement