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jmBoekestein
April 18th, 2006, 03:20 PM
Hullo everyone, I'm new here and been shortly skimming over. Great works and initiatives. I'm going to be learning so much here! :teeth:

:yayca:

Well, been working on this off and on. At this point giving the body a bit of a rest to work on the adornments/accessories.

Crit away, and thanks for checking. :bashful:

full view of the figure with edited levels:
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j284/jmBoekestein/daftPinUpLarge_35_fulledit.jpg

unedited:
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j284/jmBoekestein/daftPinUpLarge_35_full.jpg

and a close of the accessories:
http://i83.photobucket.com/albums/j284/jmBoekestein/daftPinUpLarge_35.jpg

Hope you like...
Infinit
April 18th, 2006, 03:44 PM
hi welcome to CA!

you work with 2 lightsources here
and I think the back could be lighter (not as shiny as the shoulders but not this dark)

I like the acessoirs very much
you could give her a nice tatoo btw^^

the part over the hips could be broader too

waiting for the update Infinit


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jmBoekestein
April 21st, 2006, 10:30 PM
Thx infinit! Been slowly lurking around the place. Looks like a bundle!!!


I'm amazed at the quality of work here, completely raises the bar for me... I'll be dropping in for sure!
Chingwa
April 21st, 2006, 11:17 PM
jmBoekestein hmmm, that is a striking image. I love the flowing curves you have here and the definition of shapes is especially nice. unfortunately the anatomy problems are killing this piece for me... specifically the size relation between her upper torso and her buttocks seems it should be reversed, and her waist seems too narrow. Her right arm especially looks like it is bent in an unnatural position...as if it's being bent toward the viewer across her back. Looks painful :) She could also use some more definition in her left elbow and the left hand really ought to be bigger.

Hate to sound so negative... you're onto something good here... just needs to be a little better thought out as far as real anatomy is concerned. Good Luck!
poise
April 22nd, 2006, 12:19 AM
very nice! I really like the syle of her body. nice! :)
perineum
April 22nd, 2006, 02:22 AM
As a pinup fan I like this one. But I agree w Chingwa, considering the pose you'd see more of her back in the rhomboid/rear deltoid/trap area and a little less arm.
Also it seems like the length from the bend in her lower back to the bottom of her ass is too long. Or maybe its top of her buttcrack thats too short. Perhaps it needs to extend a bit higher toward her lower back. I cant decide which..
stoph
April 22nd, 2006, 07:35 AM
not to be crude, but i think a more definitive line is needed to better denote her butt cheeks. at the moment its lacking a little bit of contrast. beautiful render nonetheless :)
Orm
April 22nd, 2006, 11:17 AM
Very nice, I like this a lot.
The cheekbone and the chin is very beatiful.

I think something should be done about her ass though. I donīt know what it is, but it looks less alive than the rest of her.

Or maybe I just looked too much at her ass :)
jmBoekestein
April 22nd, 2006, 12:52 PM
Thanks peeps, great advice! I appreciate it. I have to seriously brush up on my anatomy, I knew that, but I'm a very impatient man lol. I had a whole bunch of replies typed but the server threw it out :x.

I'm just gonna go back to te paintings and see if I can get it right.

SHoulder, ass, back and volume of the torso are on my list . :D

:yayca: