Lara with gigantic M-16

[Artox]

Pls, no comment on the size of the weapon. Some of the shadings, especially on the face didn't come out ok after the scan, so bare it in mind.
I'm looking forward to drawing the background so now is the time for editing, pls be thorough in your critics and comments.
Thank you :)

http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/3037/laraupd2ta.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[wraith2613]

Main thing that sticks out to me is the size of the head (too small), width of the neck (again too small) and the angle of her left arm (the one holding the rifle). The arm bother me because of the way it bends at the elbow, it just doesnt seem natural.

[Artox]

Yeah, I kinda noticed the head thing when drawing it too, but wasn't sure about the size, as for the arm I agree it isn't natural, but if you are aiming at something and you have to make a precise shot (which is quite impossible in this position actually) it's the only way to do it.
I just can't, no won't draw the face againg, i spent so much time making this actual expression, it just kept getting too damn nice, and a person should be looking nice while holding a rifle, right :)