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Blackarts
May 6th, 2003, 02:30 PM
just looking for some feedback, here's something new:
http://members.shaw.ca/dmandryk/Assets/Images/portfolio%20images/Blue_sword_lowrez.jpg
Ian Mack
May 6th, 2003, 02:39 PM
Well painted ! my only comment is that the left arm looks kind of flat. You have the under colour on the back but no highlight on the other side ?
navel_lint
May 6th, 2003, 07:19 PM
i'm not usually into digital paintings...but this is so well done i couldn't resist! i love your hands, perspective, and depth...
you're a phenominal painter.
tyboogie
May 6th, 2003, 11:33 PM
looking good-- i think the sword blade could be cleaner and more precise--but otherwise looks good

also i thought the white line on BG wall was actually a "step" ( like you could sit up on it) but then realized from cracks on wall it was paint or whatever
I.was.ink
May 6th, 2003, 11:40 PM
I agree with the others, this does look good. The arm does look a bit flat. The deltoid seems to cut everything off. Look for a ref, to see how the muscles bulge in and out of the arm. One other small thing, that I think would make this look better is the waste. IT looks to perfectly round, you probably intended it to be that way, but if it were to have some "peeks and valleys," it would make it more interesting.

The bolts, and other doohickies would look better if they had more detail, like the screws, and other small gadgets.

im just nitpicking, but hopefully these help. ;)

O!
HYBRID187
May 7th, 2003, 12:05 AM
i think the delt looks fine infact this looks like text book anatomy to me the 1 thing that bothers me is the angle of the blue bottle is different to the figure other than that amazing
Blackarts
May 7th, 2003, 12:32 AM
OK, I made some adjustments. I think the arm was looking a little flat too, so I tried to fix it some and I think it looks better now. Also added a bit more detial into the mech-stuff, and cleaned up a few things. Anyways I'm pretty happy with this now so I'll think I'll leave it and move on. Thanks for the feedback, I found it very useful.

update:
http://members.shaw.ca/dmandryk/Assets/Images/portfolio%20images/Blue_sword2.jpg
KayCustomz
May 7th, 2003, 10:14 AM
nice clean details
John Doe Humpface
May 8th, 2003, 10:06 AM
as long as i stay at least 6 feet from this guy, i've got no worries