Panel help

[tegehel]

Hi again,

I would like feedback on this one. I'd like to make it a tad more interesting but I'm not sure how. FYI, the skeletons on the ground aren't made to be taken literally, it's more of a metaphore, I suppose (many tried, many died). The bright contrast, or overexposure, was done to create a sense of high-noon heat. I'm thinking the horses might need more work perhaps? what else?

Thanks,

C.

http://www.tegehel.org/graphics/newfolio/colors/6_days_to_Jericho.jpg

[deviousg]

I like the painting style. Here are some thoughts - I really like the skelitons in the grass - but it should read clearly if they are real or metaphorical. I got it, but not sure if everyone would.

It might be kind of cool to see heat waves - or something to bring in more atmosphere - maybe push the overexposure.

[DustinTrimble]

The riders seem to be on the same eye level, thus it looks kinda static, like they are not really riding.

[Taibu]

The sky is very prominent in your picture, perhaps try putting some drama up there. I don't know, maybe sunset, clouds, crazy colours, vultures or a metaphore like u have on the ground :)

just a thought.

[tegehel]

Thanks for your ideas guys and gals. I have not abandonned this piece, I'm just working on 3 others at the same time right now, but please keep the comments coming, for this one really needs "something".

It's boring, that's what it is...

C.