postcard help

[tegehel]

Hi,

I would like to have your opinion on this postcard design. Any crit would be welcome. FYI, the card's standard postcard size, 4.25" x 6", front in color, back in b&w.

The problem is that sometimes after working long enough on a project, you lose track of why you chose to do it in the first place. I think I thought it was funny originally. Now, I'm not so sure anymore, so I'm asking people who see it for the first time. If you'd get a card like that, would you check the site? and would you change something gfx or text-wise?

thanks,

C.

PS: One thing I might do is to darken the NADE text on the right, for it seems to light for that darkened area, yes?

Front:

http://www.tegehel.org/graphics/newfolio/web/lemon_nade.jpg

Back:

http://www.tegehel.org/graphics/newfolio/web/lemon_nade_back.jpg

[jester]

I think it a) funny and b) would be curious enough to check the site (I will, actually) ;)

Jester

[tegehel]

Here's number 1. Any feedback?

http://www.tegehel.org/graphics/newfolio/web/conaness.jpg

and the back would be :

http://www.tegehel.org/graphics/newfolio/web/conaness_back.jpg

and number 2 is:

http://www.tegehel.org/graphics/newfolio/web/goldtooth.jpg

and the back is:

http://www.tegehel.org/graphics/newfolio/web/goldtooth_back.jpg

Comments? ideas? ty.

C.