wonky clothes

[Devils Jester]

i did these in the past few weeks since i last posted i was just goofing around with some clothing combos and these are what came out of it.

Ok so it was suggested that i should vary line thickness unfortunately the pen i have for that i use is not really a pening pen. this is what happened when i tried it.
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c264/DevilsJester/ggun.jpg


These other two are just sketches and i'd like some info on anatomy for the poses i used. Hopefully i'll get what you guys say and be able to fix them.
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c264/DevilsJester/cyber.jpg

(Ya i know he leans forward a little i tend to do that)
http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c264/DevilsJester/gunblade.jpg

And as always C & C welcome (and draw overs)

[Geophillyx]

hmm ok clothes will never really fold around breasts like that so maybe use less line under them. second, i like that you realise how the collar and the ends of the sleeves work, but remember they are affected by gravity, and will not hover like that above the arms, they will hang below. the second one is ok, but the legs are kind of long. try finding a photo of a person standing up and see the proportions, and remember them when drawing. now the third one's hands are waaay too small. make them bigger, and give him a little space between the shoulder and the neck; put the shoulder lower and more to the right. so far making progress, keep it up!

[Devils Jester]

thanx a lot i see what you mean on the hands being small on the last one. Thanx for spotting it, i'll see what i can do on it when you said fold of clothes over the breasts what exactly did you mean? Like they wouldn't suck to the body like that, or something? I'll check the proportion of the legs of the second one too. Thanx a lot again you guy(s)

[Geophillyx]

yeah, the way they go under the breasts like that, if you want to emphasise their shape, shade under it, but leave lines out. best way to do it is to use reference :)

[Christian0710]

Hey nice pictures.
I was looking a lot at the middle pose, and I think its out of balance. Try standing like your character and then you can see what I mean. The hips are not going in the correct direction. I cant put words into it because then I would have to explain to much about the human anatomy. Take a look at my drawing and try sanding in a mirror like your pose and look at your hips compared to your shoulders.

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f317/christian0710/DSC01693.jpg

I hope this helps you. Let me know if it does.