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chao
May 5th, 2003, 08:12 AM
hiya all... i posted this one before in the WIP section... but i didn't get any responses...so i tried to finish it myself.. and this is the result.. still have problem with color though.... some suggestion, comments or critiques maybe? thank you..

http://re-animation.net/charles/duel_2.jpg

Irate Customer
May 5th, 2003, 09:00 AM
There are many things I like about this piece. I like the elf's pose, and your style of painting. I really like the two-bladed sword you included as well. I think two things could improve the piece. Make the pose for the Minotaur a bit more movement-oriented, and vary the color a little for a bit more contrast to bring out some details you wish the viewer to focus on. I really like the style of it though, nice piece.

Irate

michael see
May 5th, 2003, 10:30 AM
not too bad at all:)infact the colour is nice,mood and all.looks more like a rpg game concept art..
keep it up.

KayCustomz
May 5th, 2003, 10:57 AM
I can imagine the elf losing :D

Erik
May 5th, 2003, 11:25 AM
Nice picture! If you work on it a little bit longer it will be great!

Maybe some cooler colours towards behind the minotaur - it will give more depth to the picture.

The elf is really cool but the minotaur looks a bit dumbfounded, like 'what's that elf trying to do?' Maybe he can be more decisive or more motion like he will defend/attack. It can be achieved by changing the right leg (left for us) and the mouth, i think.

Tanika
May 5th, 2003, 12:19 PM
I really like this one, I agree with contrasting the colors a bit more, but I personally like the poses. It reminds me of a boss battle in an RPG or something, like, the boss was -waiting- for him! Maybe move his right leg just a little.:3 That's what I get out of it.
I can just see the Minotaur saying "mine's bigger than yours" XD sorry, but that ax is great! Looks like it could cut through a house! :D

chao
May 5th, 2003, 07:19 PM
wow.... thanks a lot for the replies guys!!..really appreciate it..:D ...hmmm...

Irate Costumer: hmm.. bring the detail... i'll try that.. thx!

Erik: cooler color behind the minotaur... i'll try that! thanks, erik. hehehe i agree about the minotaur is being to static.. i'll try to make other scene after this... i'll try to finish this one first.. :) my first finish work... :)

KayCustomz: hehehhe:D

michael see: thanks!!

Tanika:yeah.. it can cut through the house!!:D

Vaarok
May 6th, 2003, 11:31 AM
Good quality, but you've obviously never seen a cow before, right?

He looks like a goat mixed with a llama.

Michieru
May 6th, 2003, 11:37 AM
i love this pic, i just think the minotaur wouldnt just stand like nothing is happening though hed be in a offensive position or be just outright attacking the elf or something, the whole picture reminds me of an old breathe of fire game.

grey
May 6th, 2003, 05:04 PM
the minotaur is too stiff, especially compared to the elf's action pose, I guess you were going for that 'massive presence' kind of stance, but the top-down view works against that

still . . . dead elf

chao
May 6th, 2003, 08:01 PM
vaarok: hehehe yea.. i have to get a bull reference next time.. :)

michieru:thanks.. yea.. the minotaur... i'll make it more in action for that.... thx..

grey: hmm.. the angle...hmm maybe if it's a bottom-top angle shot... maybe the scene will be stronger... hmm good point there.... i'll try that... thanks..ouuu dead elf.. hehehhee *grin*

umm.. some crits about the color, maybe? i just started to color my works thesedays... so i need as many input as i can get.. :) thanks.. a bit dumb in choosing color etc.. :(