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Snoozer
March 29th, 2006, 02:34 PM
Our current scene is about to wrap up. I rewrote Emily's part (the girl with the glasses) a bit to give her a bigger role. We spent some extra time of the street scenes, I think the added detail was worth the time. I think the explosion at the end turned out nicely.

CB
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bostlund02
March 29th, 2006, 06:31 PM
I dont know what to say man! its great. I love the way you drew the wine being poured into the glass. The look is well rounded I think :teeth:
rogfa
March 29th, 2006, 06:54 PM
These are great! You've got some solid storytelling skills. I like how you changed your angles and kept it interesting. The only crit I can make is the First Page, Second Panel is a really tough perspective, you did a good job but she looks a little squat.

Good luck!
Pixeldragoon
March 29th, 2006, 08:28 PM
I think some of the anatomy could use some work, but the colors generally look nice.

I'm no master of dialogue, but it reads very cliche to me... Though I don't know the context, so I can't really comment on it.
dogfood
March 30th, 2006, 06:25 AM
I like the story elements. It stutters here and there (jumping back and forth in the story), but that gives a good impression that it's a chaotic world and there's more than just the main story going on (several directors use this to great effect).

This is all lessened for me, though, by the fact that everyone looks like they're about 6-8 years-old. If your people have a trend, it's large foreheads and their faces scrunched in the bottom 3/8's of the head. That makes them look young, regardless of the wrinkles, guns, and wine.
Arne S.
March 30th, 2006, 07:05 AM
the backgrounds are great! -but the figures don´t look natural, gues it´s the (often changing) proportion (hope it´s the right word).
but no big thing!