Ra pose - Crits wanted!

[OneOfTwo]

Hey guys, since I finally got the hang of Painter I wanted to do a large scale picture Since I had two photo refferences I was wondering if any of you had a second opinion about the proporitions, musculature, painting techniques, color, etc:

Version 4:

http://www.hostmypic.info/uploads/7142d19098.jpg (http://www.hostmypic.info/)


Thanks for you help ^^

[sone_one]

hey great work so far ... especially the hand in the front.

- his head is too big now ruining the depth youve established with his right hand.

- his breasts are too low

- and his waist is too tapered imo

other than that its pretty solid. good job.

[edit] oh yeah his right uberarm looks weird... the should be some of his biceps visible instead of the forearm covering it entirely

[OneOfTwo]

Thanks I'll tweak it.

[OneOfTwo]

Teaked it a bit, anyone else have anything before I contemplate a background?

[Nakamura-Takumi]

dude it's like a confident Cobain, lol good picture though very well done

[OneOfTwo]

Kurt? XD That's a first- no one's said Ra has looked like Kurt before, but thanks for the compliment~

[Blaise]

Just one thing - check his waist. The upper body seems to be in perspective with the background but his waistline does not.

[OneOfTwo]

Thanks, I'll fix that when I'm coloring it.

[OneOfTwo]

Started on some coloring for it now, If anyone has any tips on the shading and what not, be free to tell~

[Arne S.]

his right shoulder is too small and his breast is a little flat. but i like the face