Newcomer...Comicbook covers

[mcwolf]

Hi everibody,

Lots of good art and talents here. Here are 2 covers I did for the comic Rash published by Narwain in december 05 and january 06...

Drawings are from me and colors from Didier Arpin.

C and C welcome...

Rash #1
http://pages.videotron.com/mcwolf/R1C01L.jpg

Rash #2
http://pages.videotron.com/mcwolf/R2C01L.jpg

[nonie]

*Very* nice color schemes! These are actually pretty involved for cel-style shading - I like it!

[Spacetoy]

I love the art work and imagery.

But Im not keen on the size or positon of the comic 'rash' logo / type face - it kind of looks plonked in, and lets the rest down.

I probably play some tunes with it, size positon, taper - blending it into the image more.

Up to you really.

[Derj]

I'm reminded of Gorillaz.. Which is cool, because I love the style. :o

I agree with Spacetoy, the logo needs to be centered or something.. Also there's quite abit of access space in the logo area, on both covers. You could really do with some clouds, or some other kind of atmosphere effect there.. Because right now, it just looks like there's a very large sheet of paper standing in the background.

[DSillustration]

I agree with Spacetoy, the logo needs to be centered or something.
guys,
im sure there is going to be a company logo, issue #, and price in that empty space...
like every other comic out there.

mcwolf,
pretty cool.
your buddy's colors definetly compliment your style really well.

im not a huge fan of the wolf on the bottom left of #2,
but thats minor.

welcome to CA ;)

[Icey]

cool style! wonderful colors! Wish i could see more of it!!

[Arne S.]

good drawings, good colors. i like its simple style!

[George Bieber]

Wow Cool! I bought that comic at my friendly neighborhood comic shop the other week based on the art work alone. It was well done throughout.
Excited to see more.

[darkshock15]

cool!!!