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[Clodhopper]

http://www.angelfire.com/ut/clodhopper/armorgirl.txt
i thought this was a huge step up in quality from my previous posts, the figure has a decent pose and acceptable anatomy i thought. but i learned some things in lighting technique at the very least. done all wit the pencil tool in painter. rip me up pls.

[Nimrod]

Very nice lighting, I like the fllor reflection. Anatomy-wise, her hands are far too small. On average, a person's hands are going to be about he size of their face (a little smaller for a woman). Try it out for yourself, the heel of your palm should line up with your chin and your fingertips close to your hairline. Also, the mouth looks too low on the face. Eyes about halfway down on the head, nose halfway between eyes and chin, and mouth halfway between bottom of nose and chin. Keep up the practice, looking good!

[ChaosEidolon]

wow man! this one really is a huge step up for you. Like Nimrod said, keep working on that anatomy and keep up the good work. Looks like youre making good progress ;)

[Trickster]

it's very good considering that i'm very crap at drawing and praise people's work but her hands are tiny! everything looks good but the things that i can point out is the hands are small and the angle of her face looks abit out!! sorry bout my comments :(:( just trying to help babes!