need help coloring(first post)

[Rad]

hi folks. I'm trying to learn how to color. This was not done from a photo. I had my girlfriend pose. But then she left and I tried to do the colors on my own. This was done in photoshop. Please give me some advice. Thank you :)

http://www.radsechrist.com/pictures/mandyweb.jpg

[DoomSkull]

Your shadin seems decent dude, i would just work on your proportions and yuoll find that the shading falls into place nicley:evilbat:

[Rad]

Can you explain what looks out of proportion. I was going for a cartoony look. Like the batman tv cartoon

[DoomSkull]

Try and define her rib cage a little more, and drop some paitned detail on her give her more of a rounded look, i understand the style your going for.

near her left boob that area seems a little outta proportion a little low

[Rad]

hea your right. I would have never noticed that. Thank you