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[behemot5]

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[ChadTHX1138]

I dont understand why that hand is jutted out like that and his arm is stiff. It doesnt look natural. Try bending the elbow some and opening the hand. I tend to do fists too to make up for not wanting to go through the headache of drawing them, But you have to overcome it and just draw them.

[Grooveholmes]

Not bad at all. I think they are a definate improvement over the first pic, man. The face on the Wingmans brother is kind of odd, could you maybe define the features more?

[Phait]

I like that last pic.... reminds me of that boss in Metal Gear Solid

[deviousg]

develop the background on that mech spider, - it will be cool!

There is something a little weird about his right front leg..

get good hand reference! What is he holding?

[Carnifex]

Originally posted by behemot5
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/angesketch.jpg
c&c are welcome
this one reminds me heck much of gerald brom...good sketches all over:)

[metalwinds]

nice stuff overall. i like the ideas you have for your characters, but they are all very simple. ..a couple more detailed characters maybe? just a thought.. . ..the designs you have posted are simple and effective, but i would like to also see you do something a little more elaborate. in addition to what carnifex said, i think you should check out broms work if you havent already.. .his stuff is really amazing, and you could get inspiration from his work. lookin forward to seeing more from you

[ummo]

WOW! in the pic on May 8th with the trailer drawn in perspective there is the spider/robot... which is amazing. awesome sense of 3 dimensional form there. I love the concept and how you made the parts of the robot's chest and shoulder flush with one another. also the weight distribution throught its body and how it sits on the spider legs is quite nice. excellent excellent sketch. It just really really clicked with me when i saw it. also you do some pretty nice tonal renderings in all your pics.

I would love to see some of them a bit more finished, maybe with some color thrown in?
nice work keep it up. :D :chug:

[BluePencilArtist]

Neat drawings... I like that trailer......

[chudzta]

the last 3 or 4 are a definate improvement.

... the next to last did its job and conveyed emotion, was that random or from a ref?

keep drawing man. the more u do it..with an occaisonal extra push for shading and the whole nine yards will definately dial ur skills quickly... peace - ry

[Grooveholmes]

No need to delete the tread man, I think they are very interesting.:(

They Self Portrait is very nice, You should attempt to paint some of these sketches to that level.

[R_M]

Noooo don't do anything hasty.... don't delete the thread! It can be very frustrating, getting lots of views and no replies but yours is a very helthy thread!

I like your sketches, and it is funny to see the suicide vampire at such an early stage. the mech sketch is difficult to read, I can't understand if it is attached to a tree trunk at the base or why it is melted. maybe some colours would help tell the story.

[Fipse]

Draw further ... you´re really getting somewhere.

Fipse

[SCARS]

I would work on your tonal range. I see a lot of white and quite a bit of black but not enough midtones in-between. Try starting on a toned paper like a 50% grey, that way your midtones are already established, and work with a white and balck pencil. Just an idea.

yeah, some anatomy and proportion studies would do you a world of help, you have a strong base already, just keep it up.

[SCARS]

better,closer, warmer.


try toning the WHOLE page and erasing out the highlights and drawing in the darks. These are just excersizes my drawing teacher from back in the day gave me, they work wonders. keep it up

[behemot5]

sorry...it's the end....

[AmadorL]

well what are you waiting for speed it up. j/k I wish I had time to draw as much.

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