Mad shooter situation

[ELGRECO]

Just a sketch I did on a boring Sunday evening.
A swat team about to jump on a mad sniper. Comments welcome.

http://www.wetcanvas.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=104176

I fixed the link, should look larger now.

[thomasaurus]

way too small, cant really give opinion on it.

[Spike Spiegel]

I like the colors

[davi]

try to sharpen your forms alittle more
what program are you using? You might want to switch brushes and find something with more of a strong edge to it, everything is getting blurred and hard to read. which would probably make it hard for you to work with, so all and all... i suggest finding a new brush.

[ELGRECO]

Hi Davi: Swat it's supposed to look blurry. I can draw really sharp images but the mood here is one of uncertainty, chaos,
despair, and darkness. The mad shooter is a time bomb and armed to the teeth anything can happen at any moment. The Swat team doesn't know what they'll find in the apartment
and in general things aren't clear: will they arrest the shooter without using violence?

[Pigeon]

but you have to have a focus. A sharpened area will have enough contrast with the rest of the piece to pull the viewer in. Then lead them around the peice with blurred movement.