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rWDrk
March 7th, 2006, 12:56 PM
I think i like it
C&C welkom

http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d122/Remcowierenga/Painter/ANTLERS_woman_18.jpg

nonie
March 7th, 2006, 01:10 PM
nice back anatomy. But there's no shadow from the antlers and they seem to be uneven, coming out of different spots on each side of her back.

Dile_
March 7th, 2006, 01:10 PM
Nice :D
I guess you havent done any changes at it since DSG, did you ?
nice focus.

bluefooted
March 7th, 2006, 01:12 PM
I found your thread title intriguing... is that weird?

There are some nicely painted parts, but it looks very unfinished to me - the (unintentional) messy edges like on the elbows add to that. Where are the shadows from the antlers? The blur effect in the background doesn't really work here, imo, because the foreground of the figure just isn't that much closer than the back.

markwagner
March 7th, 2006, 09:32 PM
Show her hips more, they are such nice parts of women, it will compliment the horns which are cool and imaginative. Don't be afraid to use LINE. You could also add one more element to add to the story, something on the ground, hanging off the horns. Who is she and why is she here?

~M

makoblue
March 8th, 2006, 11:30 AM
Its good, I especially like the concept, but the antlers just seem to have been pasted over the body. Try making them more a part of the image. Also, you have a nice depth-of-field effect going on there but the antlers don't seem to be part of it.