creativity

[behemot5]

i think i have an awfull lake of creativity or perhaps not enough imagination...

http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/freezedontmove.jpg
c&c are welcome....
thanks a lot
(if you have any solutions for my problem.. :-p )

[behemot5]

i tried to color it....
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/indymisc/freezedontmove2.jpg

[blackhand]

I like the face and expression, but the piece needs some work.

The shadow projected on the wall doesn't really look like it's coming from the figure. Also, the highlights under the arm are a bit strong and could be subtler. I think you could also use a little more work on the gun--just do some research and make the gun more realistic.

[behemot5]

i erase colors and i redo it once again :-p....
not finished ...
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/lovemymouse.jpg

[Behemoth]

getting better, need a little more detail.

heheh.. looks like David Arquette :lol:

[behemot5]

i think it's finish now...i hope you like it...hardest criticizes are the best way to learn ..give me your opinion please...thanks
http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/freehand/withmymouseonly.jpg