Noob

[Famboozled]

I absolutely love this website...im 16 years old currently a junior in high school im trying to see if i can make it into art school after I graduate...this is nothing compared to everybody elses' work but i just felt the need for some bashing...thx everybody. :bash:

http://jawesome.net/Tommy/MilitaryBase.jpg

[metaphysiks]

just gettin a red x, cant see anything that is all the crit i can give right now
chris

[Chaser226]

Its pretty good actually, theres some perspective awkwardness in a few places and some stronger contrast and highlights to pull the piece out would be nice too. :)
Oh and you can't link images directly from geocities. :o

[Famboozled]

its fixed...yea i just started taking drawing classes this year...it has changed my whole perspective on what i was going to do when i graduate, yes definitely the proportion and angles are way off thx for telling me that chaser226.

[davi]

honestly looking pretty good.
i would suggest taking some time to just play with your traditional materials and figuring out how to do stronger values.

also i suggest using cool grey... warm greys can look almost "dirty"

[Vader]

Yeah it looks nice and davi is right try to use more cool greys this lets you build it up then and apply darker grey later.
Since i have been working with grey markers my work has taken on a whole new look, and better.

Good luck

[Famboozled]

thank you for all your comments... i greatly appreciated your input... and im working on it right now (using comp. in drawing class right now :) ) all your advice inspires me to work harder, thank you once again, i hope to update you on my progress