ctbarton's sketchbook -STUDIES finally-

[Ctbarton]

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[Ryn]

Stop petting in your lines. Use single, clean strokes, instead of doing a messy scribble of many lines.

You tend to draw your foreheads too large. Remember, eyes are halfway down the face (more or less - people tend to vary, of course). Study some anatomy, from life if you can.

Also, try to scale down your pictures next time you post. It's hard to look at the whole thing when it's so huge.

Try not to take this too hard, I'm just trying to help out. Otherwise, your stuff looks very nice, especially for your age. Just remember that dedication, practice, and hard work is what sets the pros apart from the amateurs, for the most part.

[Ctbarton]

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[T-Raktor]

Yes, Ryn gave u a good advice. What i can tell more is that the neck of this last dude and the one of super man are too long. They look like camels, no offence. And that space ship does not look 3D...it looks too flat. Try to draw the vanishing points and to give the ship a perspective.

And because i see that u are new to this thing, try not to draw this complicate things at first. Draw some simple things, and make more studies. Anatomy studies i say. :) Anyway, don't get discouraged, and keep drawing.